Eugh. It seems that my story idea (yet again) got stuck at an early stage of development hell. I will try to throw my thoughts in one pile here and see if it will manage to spark some progress. And who knows, maybe it will give a push to one of you folks reading this and something interesting could eventually come of that, eh?
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The starting point of the story in the current draft is where the players first meet Elsa's crew in the game. (There were some other options, but I have even less idea about what to do with them than this one, so off the draft they go).
There are no functional differences in what has happened since the game's start - Lt. Luis Vergil (which of those is his given name anyway?) may have been less hamtastic and antagonistic in his words and actions for the purposes of other characters remembering the events and mulling over them later, for example, but it effectively changes nothing between 'game start' and 'meet the Elsa'.
First few scenes are told from Allen's POV and are little more than a simple introduction: he has just passed the standart decontamination procedure in the airlock between one of Elsa's hangars and the actual living area along with Andrew, Shion and KOS-MOS after the latter
bullied negotiated their passage to Miltia-2 and is more than a little anxious about this already very long day becoming even longer because of the agressive way KOS-MOS handled her first hitchhiking.
A short description of their surroundings and and rather terse character interaction follows. The spacecraft they find themselves on is described as what seems like a luxury yacht somebody thought would make a fine salvage ship.
There is nothing even remotely approaching 'hard' sci-fi (I don't have the knowledge to pull it off and it would get in the way of all the crazy awesome) in here, but both Allen and Shion have a spacesuit designed to enhance one's chance of survival in case of a hull breach their lifepod came with on, Andrew is dressed in one meant for work in hard vacuum and Elsa's crew operating in a debris field without any is referred to as carelessness;
it is mentioned that a ship of this small size having artificial gravity and such amenities as normal showers and kitchen (as far as a kitchen made to secure all its contents for an atmospheric reentry could be called 'normal') is quite rare.
The new passangers are met by someone we know to be chaos and are sent to the sickbay after a brief inspection.
Shion tries to insist there is no real need for that;
after a simple pat on a shoulder sends her hissing and flinching in pain (apparently shooting a gun meant to be used by combat realians when you are an unaugmented human can be bad for your health, who knew?), they all go anyway.
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Andrew completely fails to behave in an overtly suspicious manner here;
he simply states that the treatment prescribed for his medical condition precludes him from making use of a good chunk of automated procedures because of the nanomachines involved. (He is not even lying).
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KOS-MOS deems it fit to remind everyone that she is, in fact, in need of maintenance, recharge, communication uplink with Vector HQ and all that jazz. chaos calmly informs her that he will get right on that as soon as he makes sure her squishier companions are not going to die of an internal bleeding or some such nastiness;
the sooner they get this over with, the sooner they could adress the AI's own needs. And if she could operate the machinery in there, the basic diagnostic required could be done even quicker.
(She can't. In the haste to get KOS-MOS operational the project team had to heavily prioritize her qualities in open combat and put on the back burner almost everything else. That includes giving medical assistance beyond guesstimating a person's physical and mental condition with whatever sensors she is equipped with and getting qualified personnel on the scene).
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Allen is busy siliently working himself into a minor panic attack during all this. He starts to suspect that people that have picked them up are not an exactly law-abiding lot (not without reason as he will lately discover) and worries how 'hardened criminals' would react to such heavy-handed threats. Their destination is quite far, they all will need to sleep eventually - even KOS-MOS - and what will happen then?!
Moreover, while Allen mostly had to work on the software side of things during his tenure in the project, even he could discern that KOS-MOS had nowhere near enough power left to carry through her promise of destroying the ship (and would have to keep the crew alive and well regardless - to pass through the various customs on the way without additional problems, if nothing else).
She bluffed her metal arse off!Well, since this was possibly the only reason Allen was not currently trying to outsuck the void with his lungs, it probably wasn't
that bad, but still! Here he was working his guts out, helping to develop a technological breakthrough that would (hopefully) help humanity to fight back against alien starfish ghosts from the outer space, and what she does on the first day of independent function?! Friendly fire incident to lethal effect!! Commandeering a private vessel with threats of death!!!
Aaagh, he was going to have a head full of grey hair by the end of the week at this rate...
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And so this newly formed bunch of misfits sets sail towards the
wonderful adventures that await them.
For whatever reason, the Gnosis encounter on the bridge fails to materialise and Andrew remains 'unsalted'. At this time, at least.XXX
I'm not trying to imply that even this little snippet from the very beginning is planned to be canon-compliant, but so far the first major change beyond some... frivolities in interpretations is chaos.
In this story chaos is actively trying to not draw attention to his... 'otherness', so he has an actual name (currently William Henderson) and an official story with the paper trail to back this identity up.
He is a an old acquaintance of Helmer's;
they have helped each other in a number of delicate matters over the years (as suggested by his appearance in Ep.II's prologue) and generally try to work together towards mutual interests. He has served with Matthews the Federation's Marines Corps during the Miltian Conflict (he had to assume the role of the commanding officer when their previous superior got killed). 'William' has a long (if not wholly official) track record of mercenary work: he has managed to find a job as a security officer, bodyguard, combat personnel instructor and ground troops' guide in hazardous environments - to name a few things - for various private and national interests on both sides of the border. Thus a good deal of characters in the business know of (some of) his reputation, if not always the name and the face (both of which could be changed with a careful application of technology of the day and age they live in anyway) attached to it.
I did not decide what is exactly the reason for why chaos came to be this way, but regardless of what would be the final version, he is visibly aging with time, even if noticeably slower than the widely available medical expertise can provide. There are quite a few wild theories flying about how a man of 147 years old (that's the most reliable number in his biography intelligence agencies can provide) can remain this healthy in body and mind - and, more importantly, where one could get some of that for themselves.
One other major detail is his characterisation. Whatever other bits of backstory for him I decide to go with, one thing is certain: even if the cycle of rebirth referred to in Ep.III gets into the story,
chaos has no personal recollection or second-hand knowledge of such. He simply lived for way longer than anyone (to his knowledge) ever did and has some... supernatural qualities to go with that. A good deal of personal conflict has happened in that time;
when compared to other characters he has mostly worked through his uncertainties and has simply resolved to live out his days however long he manages to. No giving up, no rolling over when the Death comes knocking - he would fight for his life as fiercely as he did the first time and each and every time after that.
In other words, if human minds' reluctance to disperse themslves into collective unconscious upon death is as big trouble in this story as is it is in canon, chaos would fall square into the group of people who bring the Gnosis catastrophe closer with each passing moment, however involuntary.
His power set is mostly geared towards destruction. There are some creative applications he uses from time to time, but for the most part things like protecting Elsa in Ep.I's ending are straight out. Which can be a problem somtimes considering there are no widely available Medica spells (or any spells, really) in this story.
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There are some changes (or should I say additions, because there is really not much to change there) in most characters' backstories, but they don't come into play until later.
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Well, this is currently the gist of what I've managed to think up. There are bits and pieces pertaining to later parts, but concrete plans as of today end here.
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